October Girl

Robyn "Oh so it's my fault is it?" I glared, "Your acting like an immuture little brat." I growled. He turned and glared at me. Sam I glared up at ...

Robyn "I'd like to see you try, asshole." Sam yelled at Alex. "I think Robyn forgot to put something in you...like a brain!" Alex growled "Cool it kid I could ...

I'm baaaack!!! :) I've been gone for about 2 months :( but I'm back if you wanna talk PM me -Max

Robyn "I love you too." I laughed. Sam "What do you want to do?" "You." I said, I heard Robyn choke. "That's just not right." Robyn glared. "Hey at least ...

I like it 7/10

**I'm baaaaaack*** Robyn I raised an eyebrow at Alex. "and since when did you become the expertese?" I asked smiling. "Since I met you?" He questionally answered. "Good answer." I ...

sorry can't post I'm really really sorry but I don't have time be back ASAP!!!***

Sam I had never exactly held a crying woman before, and never before would I think it would feel this good. She was unhappy, sad, crushed, hurt in so many ...

Sam "Your not an idiot... your just... flawed?" I asked. She laughed but still had tears in her eyes. "I'll go back and ask her to return me." I said ...

Sam I nodded at her statment about the temper. "I can see that." I smirked. She glared again, "you are so sure of yourself." "Is that a flaw?" I asked. ...

banned for having the cutest avatar I've EVER seen O_O

Hello again, I promised when you wrote more and edited that I'd crit it again. I think you went into more detail, whihc is a good thing no one wants ...

banned for not giving me a piece of that kit kat bar (I'm stupid, get over it)

Sam I did not understand this girl, no, woman. She seemed lonely, hurt, maybe even scared. "Would you like me to be... flawed?" I asked. "Well... I... Are you like ...

Robyn I told you soooo." Alex said. "I think she's P.O.ed" He said. I pointed at him and glared. "I'll go see if she's ok." I said, I felt an ...